02. The task given to me by the company commander has been successfully completed.
After education, the victims of "FxG" have polished their eyes and raised their awareness.
Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.
05. In class, Xiaohua keeps her eyes fixed on the teacher.
I bought a pen, a ruler, an eraser and some stationery, and then hurried home.
No matter how good you study, there is no reason to be proud.
Martha is wearing a blue trench coat and a yellow hat.
09. Tonight, the sky is like a mirror and there are many stars. What a beautiful night scene!
10, the square was crowded with countless people.
After treatment, Xiaoming's illness has recovered.
Great changes have taken place in China since the reform and opening up.
13, after listening to the teacher, I was very educated.
I visited most of the scenic spots in the Summer Palace.
15. In the deep mountains in the northeast, earth coal mines are scattered everywhere.
He sat there listening to the teacher with rapt attention.
17. After writing a composition, you should learn to correct incorrect typos.
18, in the course of working, our hands stained the soil.
19, I whispered when I heard the news.
Only about seventy-two people attended the meeting this time.
2 1, his hands are almost completely frozen.
Many trees are planted in the campus, such as Chinese rose, begonia, phoenix tree, pine and cypress.
There are many toys in the children's shop, such as building blocks, dolls, electric trains and football.
On Sunday, the students took bread, eggs, apples, bananas, cookers and food to have a picnic.
She is wearing a bright red scarf and a white shirt.
I read books all day this morning.
27. It is shameful that this kind of food is not cherished and wasted at will.
28. The quantity of commodities on the market has greatly increased.
The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day.
answer
1. Replace "regardless" with "despite"
2. "Realization" is completed.
3. How about "letting go" of the victim?
4. "Prevent" and "Don't" conflict, and remove one.
5. "Don't blink" is "stare", remove one.
6. Replace "and" with "etc"
7. Replace "although …" with "even if …"
8. Replace "harmony" with "wearing"
9. It is scientific common sense to change "starry sky" to "moon stars are scarce".
10. "Many" and "countless" are combined into one
1 1. "Disease" and "health" are integrated into one.
12. Delete "in"
13. Add a personal name before "very cultured", such as classmates.
14. "All" conflicts with "Most". Either one will do.
15. "Sparse" and "dribbling monotony" go hand in hand.
16. "concentration" and "concentration" in one.
17. Go to "incorrect"
18. "Our hands" and "dirt" are arranged in order.
19. Who am I talking to? Change "I" to "We"
20. "72" is so accurate and still "around"? Go to "Left and Right"
2 1. Leave one for "almost" and "completely"
22. Replace "trees" with "plants"
23. Football is not a toy for children. Get rid of it.
24. Delete "and food"
25. Replace "harmony" with "wearing"
26 "morning" went
27. Add "phenomenon" after "waste"
28. Change "quantity" into "quality"
29. Remove one from "activities" and "days".
1, this is a happy, happy and joyful class meeting. Revision: delete "happiness, joy"
The teacher suddenly slowed down the progress. Modification: Delete "gradually" or "suddenly"
After this trip, I gave you great inspiration. Revision: Delete "After"
4. Copernicus dares to criticize and doubt the authoritative theory that is unrealistic but has always been considered inviolable. Revision: "Dare to criticize" and "Dare to doubt";
In order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we must improve the safety system as soon as possible.
Modify: delete "avoid" or "no longer"
6. His kind words+and kind face always come to my eyes.
Revision: Add "ringing in my ear" after "words";
7. Improving the quality is the urgent task of Chinese teaching reform.
Revision: change "increase" to "improve"
8. Winning or losing this game is not only related to the reputation of the team, but also to the honor of the school.
Revision: Change "but" to "and"
9. Seeing this exhibition made me feel a lot. Revision: Delete "make"
10, only socialism can save China. Revision: Change "Jiu" to "Cai"
1 1. After the incident, the class teacher and the class committee studied and decided to conduct an education on this issue.
Revision: change "this question" to "students", agreed.
First, improper collocation
1. The lonely mountain in summer is really a good season for us to enjoy the cool and enjoy ourselves.
2. Spring in Guang 'an is a beautiful and charming place.
3. The 12th Hubei Sports Meeting is an important organization with the largest scale, the highest specification and the most extensive influence hosted by Xiangfan since the founding of the People's Republic of China.
This novel perfectly depicts the glorious deeds of an ordinary captain.
5. I saw the simple and honest smile and cordial and hearty laughter familiar to the villagers who have been away for many years.
Thanks to the joint efforts of the whole city, Yangzhou won the UN Habitat Award in 2006.
The sentence 1 "lonely mountain" is not "season"; Sentence 2 "Spring" is not "place"; Sentence 3 "sports meeting" is not "organization"; The fourth sentence "deeds" cannot be "shaped"; The fifth sentence "laughter" can't be "seen"; Sentence 6 "Cause" is not "Result"
Second, the composition is incomplete.
1. The employment difficulty of college graduates has aroused great concern of the whole society.
2. By carrying out the "urban and rural cleaning project" activities, the environmental sanitation situation in our city has been greatly improved.
3. Mongolia is located in the northern part of the Mongolian Plateau, with animal husbandry as the main industry.
After Beijing's successful bid for the Olympic Games, I had the idea of learning foreign languages well. In 2008, I went to Beijing as a volunteer to serve the Olympic Games. In a conservation-oriented society, people's effective use of resources has been further improved.
6. In order to achieve sustainable development and strive to build harmony, we should start from ourselves and now.
Sentence 1 and sentence 2 abuse prepositions, resulting in incomplete subjects. Delete "for" in sentence 1 and delete "through" or "make" in sentence 2; The third sentence and the fourth sentence lack objects, so you can add "country" and "will" at the end of the sentence respectively. The fifth sentence, the sixth sentence lacks a subject, and the fifth sentence can be followed by "resources" and the sixth sentence can be followed by "society".
Third, repetition is troublesome.
1. At the 49th World Table Tennis Championships, China won five gold medals.
In the struggle with the criminal, he was stabbed several times and was black and blue all over.
Several new garbage collection stations have been built in many parts of this community.
It is urgent to educate young people on the socialist concept of honor and disgrace.
Cherish, protect and make good use of water resources has become a top priority at present.
The sentence 1 is used with "including" and "sweeping" with repeated meanings; The second sentence "multiple wounds in the body" and "black and blue" have the same meaning. Sentence 3 "Multiple" and "Several" are repeated; Sentence 4 "ten" and "urgent" are repeated; Repeat sentence 5 "Now" and "Urgent task".
Fourth, the word order is improper
1. The policemen discussed it seriously and listened to Director Ren Changxia's report.
The teacher patiently corrected and pointed out the problems in my homework.
3. All localities and departments regard improving people's livelihood, safeguarding people's livelihood and attaching importance to people's livelihood as the foothold and starting point of all work.
In the process of learning, we should pay attention to cultivating our ability to solve problems, analyze problems and observe problems.
I grew up in the home of Wu Opera, and Wu Opera is no stranger to me.
6. Repeated increases in fuel prices have led to a continuous decline in consumer confidence index, which has led to a chain increase in industrial and agricultural production costs, which has adversely affected China's economic development.
The sentence 1 "discuss" and "listen" are reversed; Sentence 2 "correction" and "pointing out" are reversed; The third sentence should be pay attention to first, then guarantee, and then improve; The fourth sentence should be observed first, then analyzed, and then solved; The fifth sentence should be "I am interested in Wu drama"; In the sixth sentence, the words "causing a continuous decline in consumer confidence index" and "causing an increase in industrial and agricultural production costs" should be interchanged.
5. Unreasonable
1. "Sunshine Sports Activity" requires students to participate in outdoor physical exercise for at least one hour every day, which is undoubtedly not good news for teenagers.
Countless throbbing heads and backs suddenly appeared in front of me and then quietly disappeared behind me.
Whether you have good psychological quality is the key to get good grades in the exam.
4. Carrying out the activities of "welcoming the Olympic Games, stressing civilization and cultivating new styles" is an effective carrier to promote the construction of spiritual civilization and improve the quality of citizens.
5. Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is an important guarantee for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.
6. Whether you can observe attentively and pay attention to accumulation is the basis of improving your writing level.
7. Everyone must pay attention to traffic safety when going out for an outing to prevent accidents.
In order to prevent the theft from happening again, the security department has taken effective measures.
The sentence 1 is inappropriately negated, and the last word "no" is deleted; The contradiction between "suddenly" and "gradually" in the second sentence; Sentences 3 to 6 are mistakes that can't be taken care of on both sides; The meanings of "prevention" and "no" in the seventh and eighth sentences are reversed, so the word "no" in each sentence can be deleted.
6. Improper use of words
1. Even if the Japanese government beautifies the aggression again and again, it can't hide the historical truth.
2. Lack of long-term planning and innovative spirit will hinder the healthy development of enterprises.
The sentence 1 is a hypothetical relationship, which misuses the related word "but" and can be changed to "also"; Sentence 2 "Obstacle" is a noun, so the verb "Obstacle" is used.
First, improper collocation
1. The lonely mountain in summer is really a good season for us to enjoy the cool and enjoy ourselves.
2. Spring in Guang 'an is a beautiful and charming place.
3. The 12th Hubei Sports Meeting is an important organization with the largest scale, the highest specification and the most extensive influence hosted by Xiangfan since the founding of the People's Republic of China.
This novel perfectly depicts the glorious deeds of an ordinary captain.
5. I saw the simple and honest smile and cordial and hearty laughter familiar to the villagers who have been away for many years.
Thanks to the joint efforts of the whole city, Yangzhou won the UN Habitat Award in 2006.
The sentence 1 "lonely mountain" is not "season"; Sentence 2 "Spring" is not "place"; Sentence 3 "sports meeting" is not "organization"; The fourth sentence "deeds" cannot be "shaped"; The fifth sentence "laughter" can't be "seen"; Sentence 6 "Cause" is not "Result"
Second, the composition is incomplete.
1. The employment difficulty of college graduates has aroused great concern of the whole society.
2. By carrying out the "urban and rural cleaning project" activities, the environmental sanitation situation in our city has been greatly improved.
3. Mongolia is located in the northern part of the Mongolian Plateau, with animal husbandry as the main industry.
After Beijing's successful bid for the Olympic Games, I had the idea of learning foreign languages well. In 2008, I went to Beijing as a volunteer to serve the Olympic Games. In a conservation-oriented society, people's effective use of resources has been further improved.
6. In order to achieve sustainable development and strive to build harmony, we should start from ourselves and now.
Sentence 1 and sentence 2 abuse prepositions, resulting in incomplete subjects. Delete "for" in sentence 1 and delete "through" or "make" in sentence 2; The third sentence and the fourth sentence lack objects, so you can add "country" and "will" at the end of the sentence respectively. The fifth sentence, the sixth sentence lacks a subject, and the fifth sentence can be followed by "resources" and the sixth sentence can be followed by "society".
Third, repetition is troublesome.
1. At the 49th World Table Tennis Championships, China won five gold medals.
In the struggle with the criminal, he was stabbed several times and was black and blue all over.
Several new garbage collection stations have been built in many parts of this community.
It is urgent to educate young people on the socialist concept of honor and disgrace.
Cherish, protect and make good use of water resources has become a top priority at present.
The sentence 1 is used with "including" and "sweeping" with repeated meanings; The second sentence "multiple wounds in the body" and "black and blue" have the same meaning. Sentence 3 "Multiple" and "Several" are repeated; Sentence 4 "ten" and "urgent" are repeated; Repeat sentence 5 "Now" and "Urgent task".
Fourth, the word order is improper
1. The policemen discussed it seriously and listened to Director Ren Changxia's report.
The teacher patiently corrected and pointed out the problems in my homework.
3. All localities and departments regard improving people's livelihood, safeguarding people's livelihood and attaching importance to people's livelihood as the foothold and starting point of all work.
In the process of learning, we should pay attention to cultivating our ability to solve problems, analyze problems and observe problems.
I grew up in the home of Wu Opera, and Wu Opera is no stranger to me.
6. Repeated increases in fuel prices have led to a continuous decline in consumer confidence index, which has led to a chain increase in industrial and agricultural production costs, which has adversely affected China's economic development.
The sentence 1 "discuss" and "listen" are reversed; Sentence 2 "correction" and "pointing out" are reversed; The third sentence should be pay attention to first, then guarantee, and then improve; The fourth sentence should be observed first, then analyzed, and then solved; The fifth sentence should be "I am interested in Wu drama"; In the sixth sentence, the words "causing a continuous decline in consumer confidence index" and "causing an increase in industrial and agricultural production costs" should be interchanged.
5. Unreasonable
1. "Sunshine Sports Activity" requires students to participate in outdoor physical exercise for at least one hour every day, which is undoubtedly not good news for teenagers.
Countless throbbing heads and backs suddenly appeared in front of me and then quietly disappeared behind me.
Whether you have good psychological quality is the key to get good grades in the exam.
4. Carrying out the activities of "welcoming the Olympic Games, stressing civilization and cultivating new styles" is an effective carrier to promote the construction of spiritual civilization and improve the quality of citizens.
5. Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is an important guarantee for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.
6. Whether you can observe attentively and pay attention to accumulation is the basis of improving your writing level.
7. Everyone must pay attention to traffic safety when going out for an outing to prevent accidents.
In order to prevent the theft from happening again, the security department has taken effective measures.
The sentence 1 is inappropriately negated, and the last word "no" is deleted; The contradiction between "suddenly" and "gradually" in the second sentence; Sentences 3 to 6 are mistakes that can't be taken care of on both sides; The meanings of "prevention" and "no" in the seventh and eighth sentences are reversed, so the word "no" in each sentence can be deleted. Agreed
0 1, no matter how hot the weather is, everyone still keeps exercising.
02. The task given to me by the company commander has been successfully completed.
After education, the victims of "FxG" have polished their eyes and raised their awareness.
Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.
05. In class, Xiaohua keeps her eyes fixed on the teacher.
I bought a pen, a ruler, an eraser and some stationery, and then hurried home.
No matter how good you study, there is no reason to be proud.
Martha is wearing a blue trench coat and a yellow hat.
09. Tonight, the sky is like a mirror and there are many stars. What a beautiful night scene!
10, the square was crowded with countless people.
After treatment, Xiaoming's illness has recovered.
Great changes have taken place in China since the reform and opening up.
13, after listening to the teacher, I was very educated.
I visited most of the scenic spots in the Summer Palace.
15. In the deep mountains in the northeast, earth coal mines are scattered everywhere.
He sat there listening to the teacher with rapt attention.
17. After writing a composition, you should learn to correct incorrect typos.
18, in the course of working, our hands stained the soil.
19, I whispered when I heard the news.
Only about seventy-two people attended the meeting this time.
2 1, his hands are almost completely frozen.
Many trees are planted in the campus, such as Chinese rose, begonia, phoenix tree, pine and cypress.
There are many toys in the children's shop, such as building blocks, dolls, electric trains and football.
On Sunday, the students took bread, eggs, apples, bananas, cookers and food to have a picnic.
She is wearing a bright red scarf and a white shirt.
I read books all day this morning.
27. It is shameful that this kind of food is not cherished and wasted at will.
28. The quantity of commodities on the market has greatly increased.
The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day.
answer
1. Replace "regardless" with "despite"
2. "Realization" is completed.
3. How about "letting go" of the victim?
4. "Prevent" and "Don't" conflict, and remove one.
5. "Don't blink" is "stare", remove one.
6. Replace "and" with "etc"
7. Replace "although …" with "even if …"
8. Replace "harmony" with "wearing"
9. It is scientific common sense to change "starry sky" to "moon stars are scarce".
10. "Many" and "countless" are combined into one
1 1. "Disease" and "health" are integrated into one.
12. Delete "in"
13. Add a personal name before "very cultured", such as classmates.
14. "All" conflicts with "Most". Either one will do.
15. "Sparse" and "dribbling monotony" go hand in hand.
16. "concentration" and "concentration" in one.
17. Go to "incorrect"
18. "Our hands" and "dirt" are arranged in order.
19. Who am I talking to? Change "I" to "We"
20. "72" is so accurate and still "around"? Go to "Left and Right"
2 1. Leave one for "almost" and "completely"
22. Replace "trees" with "plants"
23. Football is not a toy for children. Get rid of it.
24. Delete "and food"
25. Replace "harmony" with "wearing"
26 "morning" went
27. Add "phenomenon" after "waste"
28. Change "quantity" into "quality"
29. Remove one from "activities" and "days".